tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post652676975972563168..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: When Becky Came, Part 13Ashley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-6518239693276970162011-07-05T17:49:53.772-07:002011-07-05T17:49:53.772-07:00Karl, I'm sure the ending could have been allo...Karl, I'm sure the ending could have been allowed another scene or even two, but I didn't think I could make it interesting enough without opening up new story lines that would require even more story to be told. For me this seemed like the best option, a nicely wrapped up story and I get to move on to the next idea floating around in my head.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-10995266249462087042011-07-04T07:35:23.888-07:002011-07-04T07:35:23.888-07:00Forgot to add my name to the above comment.
Karl ...Forgot to add my name to the above comment.<br /><br />Karl Friedrich GaussAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-55606935095737106202011-07-04T07:34:19.110-07:002011-07-04T07:34:19.110-07:00A satisfying conclusion, if as Damien suggests, a ...A satisfying conclusion, if as Damien suggests, a little sudden. You could have perhaps extended it to another installment. Perhaps if you ever publish this in a book you could add a bit more after Diana's spanking. I can see what you mean that the characters didn't want it to stop. And as a reader, one does rather sympathize with them.<br /><br />Not that I'd be suggesting a spanking for our favourite spanking writer who is already one of the most disciplined young ladies in the spankosphere, what with her undoubtably impressive record of setting a schedule and following it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-77671000374684222982011-06-30T22:09:52.553-07:002011-06-30T22:09:52.553-07:00Al, Thanks, I'm pleased you liked it. It'l...Al, Thanks, I'm pleased you liked it. It'll be just one extra week before the next story begins.<br /><br />DJ, The problem with writing short stories, is that they have to end and sometimes the character just don't want them to end. LOL<br /><br />Ace, Nice to hear from you and glad to see you're still enjoying the stories. I'll do my best to keep up with the three posts a week. For now it's working.<br /><br />Vlad, I don't know, where I grew up, talking while serving corner time was akin to asking for another spanking as bad or worse than the one that got me there. But I do imagine they had some interesting things to say later.<br /><br />Paul, I don't think anyone is old friends with a switch, but I have met more than one of them. Funny, I always felt the conversations were rather one-sided.<br /><br />Carla, Thanks. It's nice to be appreciated.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-11353606750446847272011-06-30T13:11:03.371-07:002011-06-30T13:11:03.371-07:00Just lovely, as we have come to expect from the wo...Just lovely, as we have come to expect from the wonderful Ashley J!<br /><br />:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-60786661307010479862011-06-30T04:55:44.769-07:002011-06-30T04:55:44.769-07:00Ash, very well done, great ending.
Your descriptio...Ash, very well done, great ending.<br />Your description is so realistic, makes me wonder if the switch isn't an old friend.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-67169577767892463892011-06-29T19:45:39.937-07:002011-06-29T19:45:39.937-07:00That second switching was a bit of a suprise endin...That second switching was a bit of a suprise ending. I'd like to have heard some of the conversation on both sides of the post, standing nude after a switching must be one heck of an icebreaker. Thanks for another good story.Vladnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-88376809210300578462011-06-29T19:09:51.637-07:002011-06-29T19:09:51.637-07:00Just wanted to chime in and say that was a great s...Just wanted to chime in and say that was a great story. I can hardly wait to read your next one. The three posts a week change is definitely a welcome one.♠ace of spadeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10934262823799177199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-51448060154388594432011-06-29T16:19:18.400-07:002011-06-29T16:19:18.400-07:00ended slightly abruptly - but an American classic ...ended slightly abruptly - but an American classic style ;)<br /><br />DJDJBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17018328269884959487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-43281437505243625812011-06-29T11:31:09.790-07:002011-06-29T11:31:09.790-07:00Ash,
Excellent post
the discipline scene was very...Ash,<br />Excellent post <br />the discipline scene was very well done, you do those scenes very good<br />and not to forget the story as a whole was done Excellent.<br />looking forward to the next Chapter,story <br />AL :)ALnoreply@blogger.com