tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post4085476235387472746..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: The Pickett Family Holiday, Part 06Ashley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-26544051320749031372011-12-13T21:49:22.895-08:002011-12-13T21:49:22.895-08:00Bill, Thanks. Dialog and description are important...Bill, Thanks. Dialog and description are important aspects too, but I find when I understand my characters thoughts and emotions the dialog and descriptive pieces come easier. Sometimes, the characters even start to tell me what they will and will not say, in my head of course and purely imagined.<br /><br />I should have some time in January to look over anything you'd like to share.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-51419638545237736612011-12-12T16:10:51.002-08:002011-12-12T16:10:51.002-08:00Ashley:
Thanks so much for the reply. I've be...Ashley:<br />Thanks so much for the reply. I've been writing these stories for years, my only venture into fiction. Up to now I've been concentrating on dialogue and description. The thoughts of the characters are a new thing for me. Your stories do this better than any I have read. I'm still reading the older ones.<br /><br />Thank you for your wonderful work. If you are still willing to look at a couple in January, I will try to send you my best work.<br /><br />BillBill Orrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00816495950302267113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-33406288806315308082011-12-11T22:23:41.561-08:002011-12-11T22:23:41.561-08:00Bill, I'm sorry it took so long to reply to yo...Bill, I'm sorry it took so long to reply to you. I've been away from the blog this past week, life intervenes and all that, but I'm hoping to get a few more parts of the story done soon.<br /><br />It's great to hear you're getting ideas for your own stories. In my opinion, the details surrounding characters' thoughts and emotions are among some of the most important aspects in creating a fictional story that connects with readers. Obviously the hardest part is putting yourself in the character's fictional shoes and coming up with true to life reactions, but of course it's easier if you have real life experiences to draw upon.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-42672844928373712522011-12-03T06:59:12.876-08:002011-12-03T06:59:12.876-08:00Ashley:
Great chapter! Again, excellent detail a...Ashley:<br /><br />Great chapter! Again, excellent detail and insight into your characters' heads. I love how Stephanie knows she deserves this spanking but the reason she is getting it is different from the reason for which she knows she deserves it. Also the implication that she accepts her parents' discipline for acts not committed within the family structure. <br /><br />On pins and needles to see which Pickett women will get spanked next and which guys will be present when the correction is handed out.<br /><br />You are really inspiring me as a writer. Fiction is not my genre and for my own spanking stories, you are helping me add detail and psychological insight.Bill Orrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00816495950302267113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-47721356367400258162011-12-02T23:01:52.177-08:002011-12-02T23:01:52.177-08:00Paul, Thanks. I promise the story is all fiction. ...Paul, Thanks. I promise the story is all fiction. I am feeling the best I have in months, but still have a little way to go before I'm going to be back at 100%. Fortunately, I don't have to worry about school again until the end of January and I can spend the next several weeks resting and catching up on things like my blogging.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-30744208304088558652011-12-02T05:19:50.925-08:002011-12-02T05:19:50.925-08:00Ash, a beautifully descriptive piece of writing.
A...Ash, a beautifully descriptive piece of writing.<br />As long as it's fiction it is fine, real would be another matter.<br />I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill, I hope that you are fully recovered now.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-78151519861062594172011-12-01T21:54:46.782-08:002011-12-01T21:54:46.782-08:00Jim, I'm pleased you've enjoyed my work. T...Jim, I'm pleased you've enjoyed my work. There is more to come for both The Jade Runner and The Pickett Family and most likely some new stories after they are all done. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.<br /><br />Vlad, This was indeed one of the more detailed and drawn out spanking scenes I've written in quite awhile. I will neither confirm nor deny whether I've actually had tears running into my hairline while being bent over a piece of furniture and spanked. I'll keep them coming as they get finished although for the moment it's looking like two or three days between posts until I can get myself back up to my normal speed.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-7994648721905960082011-12-01T18:55:09.535-08:002011-12-01T18:55:09.535-08:00That was brilliant, you captured all of the little...That was brilliant, you captured all of the little details and big embarrassments. The tears running up into Stephanie's hairline were a perfect touch, the sort of thing only actual experience or a lot of thought could come up with. Please keep up the accelerated posting if you have the parts ready so we can find out what happens.Vladnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-38246973888364300892011-12-01T10:10:22.243-08:002011-12-01T10:10:22.243-08:00Ashley,
In one sitting I've read everything o...Ashley,<br /><br />In one sitting I've read everything on this site! Your work is incredible! I have long ago downloaded your free stories, but lost them in my last computer crash.<br /><br />I LOVE Jade Runner and the Picket Family. These are too good for words other than THANK YOU for sharing them with us.<br /><br />I will be buying your other works soon as the wallet allows!<br /><br />Thanks, again!<br /><br />Jimfatherjimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806913960789505680noreply@blogger.com