tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post3877385403827093573..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: The Bad Girl ShuffleAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-22608929469986581652010-05-12T22:37:50.541-07:002010-05-12T22:37:50.541-07:00François, Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. I...François, Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. I can safely say I agree with your analysis of public vs. private punishment and I would even venture to say that while most spankees would shy away from such a situation (there are of course those who seek it out) I think in the story universe such situations carry with them a high appeal. Maybe it is because such situations are rare in reality or perhaps because there is some tenuous connection between spanking and feelings of embarrassment which these situations would obviously touch upon. As far as which observer would be the most dreaded, I can't answer for everyone, but personally I think the worst would be the casual acquaintance. A person you know, but don't know well and even if you don't see them everyday you will see them again. That person, is the one who will always leave you wondering about what they think and how many others they might tell.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-42259004656684340062010-05-07T14:36:36.516-07:002010-05-07T14:36:36.516-07:00Ashley,
You raised the question about what was th...Ashley,<br /><br />You raised the question about what was the key component of this story, and my personal answer is the witness’s presence. If I imagine myself being a girl deserving a punishment and I am given the choice of a milder spanking in public, or a longer, harsher one in private, I’d go for the private scorcher. In a heartbeat, I would. Which of course would be a reason for the parents/guardian/punisher to invite a sibling, relative, neighbour, teacher, best friend or boyfriend to watch the event. There is an interesting study, actually, to be made on who among these witnesses would be the most embarrassing. I can imagine different girls would have different opinions on the subject, and a discussion among them would be enlightening. <br /><br />You are a master storyteller, Ashley, and stories have a huge power on the mind. <br />Take care<br />FrançoisFrançoisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-74538877522091416302010-05-07T12:37:24.011-07:002010-05-07T12:37:24.011-07:00François,I liked how the anonymity worked in this ...François,I liked how the anonymity worked in this story. It was difficult a couple of times to maintain because of the inherent confusion with two unnamed men, but I think the results were worth it. Keeping true to her perspective, I found it natural and easy to keep her misdeed(s) shrouded in mystery.I think it is quite normal at a moment such as this one that the thoughts run toward everything, but the reason one is there.<br /><br />Al, A little embarrassment, a customizable offense for the reader to invent, throw in a paddle and some blushing cheeks and it's just like a customizable spanking fantasy. lol.<br /><br />Paul, It does seem I struck a good chord with this one. I might have to revisit this writing style and see what more I can do with it. I wonder if the presence of an outsider was the key component or if it was the vantage point with the lack of detailed information?<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-65244033633682243292010-05-07T11:35:12.560-07:002010-05-07T11:35:12.560-07:00Ash, as far as I can see, everything has been said...Ash, as far as I can see, everything has been said.<br />A brilliant insight into a naughty girls' mind as she takes the humiliation of a hard bare bottom spanking in front of a virtual stranger.<br />Excellent writing, thank you dear girl.<br />Warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-21428958415430484352010-05-07T10:33:05.313-07:002010-05-07T10:33:05.313-07:00Ash,
Fantastic story,like how you wrote it and th...Ash,<br /><br />Fantastic story,like how you wrote it and that we do not know what her misdeed was also nice touch with neighbor there to add to her embarrassment. sure that had a good effect of making her blushing on both ends <br />thanks for the Excellent story :)<br />ALALnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-68409420466347749612010-05-07T08:10:51.777-07:002010-05-07T08:10:51.777-07:00I am breathless. Such a perceptive, empathic analy...I am breathless. Such a perceptive, empathic analysis of this young woman’s feelings! Every cause, major or minute, of her embarrassment is so well observed and rings so true. These two men know what ‘works’, and they spare her nothing: partial nudity, fetching the instrument of her correction, indifference (she can’t even arouse their desire)… We don’t know what she is guilty of? We ignore who the punisher is: parent, guardian, lover? The neighbour may or may not be an aggrieved party, and his presence may be only to increase the girl’s humiliation. The whole setting is in place only to explore what’s happening in this unfortunate girl’s head (and on her bottom). Oh, how desperately she would like to scratch their eyes out, and yet, she takes her medicine. A tour de force, AshleyFrançoisnoreply@blogger.com