tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post7923502781876061893..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: Writing LinesAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-51084321249050074392020-12-18T06:19:23.809-08:002020-12-18T06:19:23.809-08:00Line-writing assignments are a powerful tool in a ...Line-writing assignments are a powerful tool in a Mistress's arsenal. They are an effective way of instilling corrective behavior, keeping a slave's devotional attentions actively focused for extended periods, and are an all-too effortless way for Mistress to exercise Her dominance and sadistic whims. All this without Her having to raise a finger. A writing instruction that will take Mistress only seconds to assign will keep a slave painstakingly riveted for hours and hours on end. Is there any gesture of authority more potent? Mistress Deb latched onto the idea of giving written assignments early in our relationship. It began rather humbly with line writing tasks with 20 repetitions, and soon flowered into an expanded part of my submissive devotion. The assignments fell into three categories: 1) reinforcing new instructions (50 to 200 repetitions); 2) punishment for transgressions (500 to 1500 repetitions); 3) devotional time-fillers. The number of repetitions for each category and each instance vary widely depending on Mistress's discretion. Not a day passes when I do not have an ongoing written assignment in preparation for Mistress Deb, whose shelved collection of such submissions remains intimidatingly large and ever expanding. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-78850286664996198512010-11-07T13:10:17.128-08:002010-11-07T13:10:17.128-08:00Hedgehog, I thought this would be a nice change of...Hedgehog, I thought this would be a nice change of pace, although I admit I had planned to intersperse these articles with stories so as to mix things up a bit. Unfortunately, my time has been at a premium lately and all I've been able to do is post things I wrote in advance. Thanks for sharing your method on writing lines.<br /><br />Al, although I've never found anything enjoyable about writing lines (and I really do love to write), the discipline is probably one of the most effective ways to make someone really think about their actions.<br /><br />Paul, I have to agree, it does work well.<br /><br />Anon, I will try to get some stories finished soon and start mixing them in with these articles. Thanks for reading.<br /><br />François, You'll be pleased to know this is only the beginning of the series and I have many more to come some of which you mention and although I didn't originally put anything in about witnesses, I like the idea and as long you don't object I think I'll add that to my series. It should make for an interesting article.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-2727982335818688122010-11-06T10:38:27.133-07:002010-11-06T10:38:27.133-07:00Ashley,
I love this series. The falsely detached ...Ashley, <br />I love this series. The falsely detached tone is used with great skills to spur the reader’s imagination. Do give us more. There are many aspects of discipline, and I am sure you could write a 3-volume encyclopaedia, which would captivate your fans. A comparative analysis of implements, and how best to position a spankee given the job to be performed on her would be necessary entries. There are others, like dealing with a spankee, who can’t keep in position. <br /><br />A less obvious one is the presence of witnesses. They add to the embarrassment of a punishment, and therefore should be welcome, but witnesses have their specificities. I can think of the mother’s best friend, who shows unwanted condescending sympathy to the young lady awaiting her fate; the experienced relative, who gives the spanker detailed advice during the process; the uncle, who is an old pervert; the neighbours, who will forever greet the punished girl with little smirks, or allusions about what they saw; the boyfriend, whose presence may be so awful as to cause plans of suicide, or be comforting, or even erotic, and in any case the prelude to emotional discussions the following days; and also younger boys. I would think that for a woman the presence of younger boys witnessing her spanking must be the most humiliating experience. I think I know why this is, but I would like to hear it from a woman. <br /><br />FrançoisFrançoisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-45172676494795393642010-11-03T12:12:46.487-07:002010-11-03T12:12:46.487-07:00Back to the stories please? I like your stories an...Back to the stories please? I like your stories and the idea of nudity after. Will be waiting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-79224780960191224282010-11-02T06:15:33.793-07:002010-11-02T06:15:33.793-07:00Ash, I have had great success with lines.
The good...Ash, I have had great success with lines.<br />The good thing about lines is that it blends seamlessly with other forms of punishment, such as spanking and corner-time.<br />Any combination works well.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-73647308218911321442010-11-01T17:55:31.354-07:002010-11-01T17:55:31.354-07:00Ash,
another great story
Lines are a good form of...Ash,<br />another great story <br />Lines are a good form of discipline<br />in my opinion it also makes the one writing them think about there misdeed and what to do to improve.<br />Think writing lines works good with a sore backside.<br />Thanks for the story it was very informing and well written<br />ALALnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-63928724238709094202010-11-01T09:58:45.077-07:002010-11-01T09:58:45.077-07:00Thank you for continuing with this mini-series on ...Thank you for continuing with this mini-series on correction methods for unruly submissives; you have researched and written them extremely well, and although I have never myself slapped a submissive's face nor punished her hands, I can see a lot in them that is useful and salutary.<br /><br />I have often set lines as a punishment, sometimes giving the submissive blank A$ sheet on which she must first rule the lines before starting work. <br /><br />I insist that lines are grouped in tens and numbered in a different colour of ink, as are the margins I require. I usually accept two minor mistakes per page, providing they are accompanied by unspoilt lines to the same number; <b>more</b> than two mistakes results in the whole page being discounted.<br /><br />Naturally, any punishment of this kind is in addition to the submissive's other duties and responsibilities, and must be completed in her own time, whatever that may be, even if it means her missing out on her rest or recreation time.<br /><br />It is a fine, traditional punishment that focuses the mind wonderfully well; thank you for discussing it with us.hedgehognoreply@blogger.com