tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post5350948238227994983..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: Fit to be SpankedAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-26317623377773843282012-09-18T14:05:47.145-07:002012-09-18T14:05:47.145-07:00Bahama Girl, Thanks! Pleased you liked it.
Bill, ...Bahama Girl, Thanks! Pleased you liked it.<br /><br />Bill, Thanks. It's always difficult choosing the details in a story, but a good rule of thumb is if it doesn't benefit the story to describe it, don't. Of course, benefit the story is a little subjective.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-34297120163304128802012-09-17T14:42:10.098-07:002012-09-17T14:42:10.098-07:00Ashley:
This is a superb little story. You tell ...Ashley:<br /><br />This is a superb little story. You tell as much by letting the reader supply more details. As good as you are with details, you have a real talent for knowing what to leave out. I just finished a story that takes place in a fitting room but the situation is very different.<br /><br />BillAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05229068883880434619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-23969154389062078482012-09-17T14:41:40.276-07:002012-09-17T14:41:40.276-07:00Ashley:
This is a superb little story. You tell ...Ashley:<br /><br />This is a superb little story. You tell as much by letting the reader supply more details. As good as you are with details, you have a real talent for knowing what to leave out. I just finished a story that takes place in a fitting room but the situation is very different.<br /><br />BillAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05229068883880434619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-53988551827426092922012-09-16T18:22:36.488-07:002012-09-16T18:22:36.488-07:00Great story ash !Great story ash !Bahama girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13780782191321183147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-54439181574336147712012-09-16T13:48:27.805-07:002012-09-16T13:48:27.805-07:00Paul, Thanks. I didn't notice the connection u...Paul, Thanks. I didn't notice the connection until it was pointed out, but I can certainly see it now. It's amazing how the subconscious mind works sometimes.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-38644315172590156312012-09-16T04:22:38.519-07:002012-09-16T04:22:38.519-07:00Ash,
you have a beautiful touch with short storie...Ash, <br />you have a beautiful touch with short stories.<br />And I agree with Vlad, it does have a sense of the Pickett family.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-71927324499064117072012-09-15T14:01:56.154-07:002012-09-15T14:01:56.154-07:00FrSpanko, You're welcome.
Al, Thanks. It can ...FrSpanko, You're welcome.<br /><br />Al, Thanks. It can get hard to find appropriate pictures, but they do seem to grab attention.<br /><br />Jim, Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />Vlad, I just wrote this as a short random scene, but I like the possible connection to the Pickett Family you identified. In re-reading it I find myself in agreement, this does seem like a little bit of a back story for Nicole. Thanks.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-20509635361432015192012-09-15T13:32:48.291-07:002012-09-15T13:32:48.291-07:00This was a nice vignette from the world of your st...This was a nice vignette from the world of your stories, although I find myself wishing Nicole did provoke her mother, and also wondering if her last name is Pickett. The setting and family dynamics do fit with a younger unmarried version of Nicole Pickett. Also thanks for keeping to the weekly postings again.Vladnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-57038390272737707062012-09-15T11:52:49.784-07:002012-09-15T11:52:49.784-07:00Dear Ashley,
You fit so much content, both image ...Dear Ashley,<br /><br />You fit so much content, both image and character into a short story! It is amazing!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing!<br /><br />Jimfatherjimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806913960789505680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-40195914608710790572012-09-15T09:39:54.004-07:002012-09-15T09:39:54.004-07:00Ash,
That was a Excellent story.
It had a lot of i...Ash,<br />That was a Excellent story.<br />It had a lot of interesting elements in it that I thought was good and seemed effective.<br />Looking forward to future stories.<br />(Oh just wanted to say again you do pick awesome pictures that fit your stories very good).<br />Thanks for the story<br />AL :)ALnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-49022649153339156772012-09-14T22:23:56.744-07:002012-09-14T22:23:56.744-07:00Thanks for this new story. Thanks for this new story. FrSpankonoreply@blogger.com