tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post247362648565674066..comments2024-03-25T11:04:53.943-07:00Comments on Imagine The Stories: A Bent PerspectiveAshley Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-38064113435927828742010-08-27T06:47:58.425-07:002010-08-27T06:47:58.425-07:00Ash, may I add a PS to your reply.
Perhaps even mo...Ash, may I add a PS to your reply.<br />Perhaps even more fun for your loyal readers.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-9729522639230891182010-08-26T21:12:26.019-07:002010-08-26T21:12:26.019-07:00Al, As I wrote this story, it was burning hot outs...Al, As I wrote this story, it was burning hot outside and I found myself fantasizing about a nice cool thunderstorm which naturally led to an inclusion of the similar cleansing characteristics of a storm and a spanking. I'm sure it's been done before, but I tried to make it a little unique here in method.<br /><br />Karl, I typically have written my stories focusing on character development through their actions. Recently, I have been studying on alternative manners of character development such as in this story where everything we learn about the central character is through her reactions and thoughts to the spanking in process. The results seem to be well received and I have to say I am satisfied as well.<br /><br />As for personal experience, I think it would be safe to say I have had plenty which I can call upon to populate my stories with the real details that only experience can produce.<br /><br />Paul, I think all my writing has elements there are personal, but I can see why this one would seem more so than many of the others. The third person writing style allows me to narrate the story without the disguise of a fictional character. I am always striving to improve my writing and exploring different styles like this is a lot of fun for me.<br /><br />Hugs,<br />AshAshley Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14242036743645170042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-84458141218978887402010-08-25T11:54:02.718-07:002010-08-25T11:54:02.718-07:00Ash, to echo Karl, this does seem remarkably perso...Ash, to echo Karl, this does seem remarkably personal.<br />Your descriptions are, for you, on the florid side..<br />Also, her reflections are rather mature, suggesting that she won't be in this position too frequently again.<br />You always write extremely well, it's good to see you trying out different styles.<br />Love and warm hugs,<br />Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-56349632249985555332010-08-25T08:00:20.265-07:002010-08-25T08:00:20.265-07:00Love the detail, Ashley. Such as:
"She drea...Love the detail, Ashley. Such as:<br /><br /> "She dreaded the rush of wind preceding the paddle’s touch. Its cool draft would be just enough to temper the blaze burning in her bottom."<br /><br />Describing the details of a spanking like that just hasn't been done nearly enough, I think. Makes me wonder how much personal research was needed to enable you to recreate this so vividly.Karl Friedrich Gausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01229774469243094801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7518647266576010083.post-81332201953759217942010-08-25T06:56:01.290-07:002010-08-25T06:56:01.290-07:00Ash
Excellent story
Like the references you made w...Ash<br />Excellent story<br />Like the references you made with boating,Sailing terms and just plain not so good weather terms...like on the open sea in a rainstorm..also liked the description of the scene as she pictured it happening with her thoughts...this story had great imagination<br />Thanks for a awesome story<br />AL :)ALnoreply@blogger.com